Writing

Writing

22.10.09

//THE DIARY OF JACK LASSION//

//69.32.2037// it was great morning a wonderful morning the best morning of my life! i got up i had breakfast, brushed my teath had a shower in only 25 min a new record! i didn't miss the bus and i remmbered my homework today and i only got one blue card! I didn't get fired from bendys and i dint have to scoop the cheese I got home on time as well finshed my chours and had dinner all before shortland street This was the best day of my life!

20.10.09 walt evaluate charater descriptions

wilf



15.10.09 walt create an imaginative short story


 * __the secret__**

Hi im bobby carlburger and i have a secret do you want to know? O.k. well it started of 2 years ago in a house on cuplu drive a dark street where only some of the meanest, shadiest and evilest people on earth dear to tread and i lived in the house with my 2 parents who were some of the most devious people in the world but i was not evil like them and the despised me for it.So i spent the firest 13 years of my live watching my parents torcher anamails scam childern but on my 13teenth birthday the most evil thing possible they stole candy from a baby and then i finally snapped...

2.09.09 walt support an argument wilf
 * 1) cause and effect
 * 2) evidence
 * 3) emotive laguege
 * 4) reasons
 * 5) generalisations

If you don't have evidence to use - you need __**good**__ reasons.

school canteens should only sell healthy food because New Zealand is the 3rd most obese country in the world! and don't want to come 1st another reason is that if people

01.09.09 __causal connectives__
 * contributs to
 * as a reslult of
 * produse
 * leads to
 * will affect
 * caused by
 * because
 * therefore
 * will influince
 * because


 * action/event - what it leads to**

1. __Mrs guy's fear of flying__ __came from__ __seeing the movie death flight 201.__ cause connectives effect

2. __going without sleep__ __caused__ __tiredness__ cause

3.__salt in a cut__ __creates__ __s//tinging pain//__ effects connectives cause

17.08.09 walt use evidence to prove generalisation or support reasons

28.7.09 walt explain the purpose of an argument

17.06.09 WALT show, not tell in our writing to involve the reader __My original sentence:__ Triksy was a strange, skinny girl with a dark past and hates her parents. __Applying show don't tell:__ Awkwardly, Tricksy slumped down the hall to the principal's office. her thin legs looked as if they would snap at any waking moment **Teacher example:** her knee bones protruding sharply as she bent them with every step she took.

many eyes were glued to her. Some people where giving looks of contempt and disgust as she slumped past.

9.06.09 WALT describe the setting in a narrative

20.05.09 charatur 4 triksy was a strange skinny girl with a dark past and hates her parents charatur 2 jane is a sneaky sly school securitie who enjoys stealing cskinhoclate form her boss

13.05.09 walt pant a picture in the readers mind about a character

wilf
 * size - shape - height
 * facial featurs
 * hair
 * background
 * feelings and thougths
 * cloths
 * gender/age
 * personality

11.05.09
 * 1) he spins straw into gold
 * 2) an American company found a way to

25.02.09 __**Elephants**__

An elephant is a animal.

There are two different breeds of elephants African & Indian.

An Elephant is a big Grey/Brown animal with a long trunk that has rough wrinkly skin.

They live in afrika and inda.

Elephants are vegterens.

4.3.09 __//**w.a.l.t understand how a report is structured**//__

16.3.09

__//**The Kakapo**//__

A Kakapo is a rare flightless native bird of new Zealand

A kakapo is green with an owl,s face and cats whiskers

They live in new zealand and eat fruit, leaves and tussock grass

17.03.09

__//**bat's**//__

A bat is a nocturnal mammals that can fly

They eat insects, fruits, flowers, fish and blood!!!

Some bat's eat a lot of food get fat for hibernation

__//**kangaroo**//__

A kangaroo is a marsupial from the family Macropodidae which means large foot

It is the biggest Macropodidae in the world

25.03.09 walt make predictions about the text prior to reading wilf look for clues in
 * the blurb
 * testimonials
 * title
 * author
 * heading
 * images

other terms for the topic word dolphins
 * marine animals
 * aquatic mamals
 * clowns of the sea
 * wave riding mamals
 * swimming
 * graceful mammals
 * playful species
 * marine mammals

rats
 * cheese loving mammals
 * fury mammals
 * moving mammals
 * mammals

change the topic statment of this paragrh

Nutrients are food materials in addition to promote growth and Soil organisims release Nutrients however Ecosystem depends on decomposition to create energy but Leaves and branches fall from tree - partially broken down by decomposition and Roots take in Nutrients

make a list of cojaction and conectives

30.03.09 Lesson 3 Going, going, gone!

1.C 2.A 3.B 4.B 5.